WooHoo! What a round! If you missed any of the amazing stories, check them out here. Otherwise, let's read what the judge had to say:
I thought all the stories were very good. A few, I could
have seen myself writing. And I was surprised by 3 references to
"Footloose."
My thoughts:
"Release" by Tamara Shoemaker
A very touching story, with some great phrasing. I think my
favorite was "explode in a million angry sparks."
"Serendipity" by Rebekah Postupak
Seemed like "My Fair Lady" meets
"Cinderella." I really liked the voice of Dominique.
"Streetfighter" by Mark Driskill
A funny read as it went along. Then at the end the POV is
pulled out to reveal what is really happening.
"Love And The Gods" by Erica Rahaman
You had me at cleavage. Seriously, a nice take on classical
mythology. I could easily see these characters in a longer short story or a
novel....
"The Woods" by Michael Simko
I'm always a sucker for a great phrase, and "The gunman
looks like a TWISTED love child of a moonshiner and a clown" was it.
Special Challenge Champion
Grand Champion
"Release" by Tamara Shoemaker
Much of the flash I write relies on humor. For that reason,
"Love And The Gods" was a close second. But lately, I've tried to
pull a few more heartstrings, as it were. And "Release" does that. It
starts out with a typical child-parent exchange. But soon we learn of "the
pain and heartbreak of the last month" which even the child feels inside.
Then at the end, we hear in real-time our heroine's tough decision.
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