Sorry the post is late. If you missed reading either of our entries, you can amend that here. Once you've read them, here's what the judge had to say:
Special Challenge Champion
Modern Day Duel
by Lauren Greene
I liked the tone of this piece, the narrator’s confusion and
subsequent headache easily transported the reader in the character’s headspace.
The author included the special challenge in a wonderful manner, something that
is sure to stick with me in the future when feeling sick. Also, as a DC
resident, I was able to fully picture the setting the author described. Great
work!
Grand Champion
Simple Math
by Holly Geely
A light and funny piece about meddling gone wrong. I liked
the dynamic between the sisters, it was very realistic and the author did a
great job of balancing a caring, loving, sister with one that also disapproved
of her twin’s lifestyle. I liked the format as well, including the “before” and
“after” seamlessly and telling a great story in such few words.
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